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Chaos Star

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Posted 06-29-2010 at 08:18 AM by Lady Sorrow

Our days together,
They feel so far away.
My heart is achig for you,
I should have watched my ways.

But all I could see was you,
The one who shone
Brighter oh ever so brghter,
Then the stars ever could alone.

Your forrest eyes, so beautiful,
Shone brighter than the sun.
I wish you could have seen
Your eyes sparkle as you smiled.

Maybe you were my destruction,
But I know we'll go far.
I'll take a risk and a couple more
For my beautiful Chaos Star.

But the question I have is,
Will you take a risk or more for me?
Will you prove the love you say you feel,
Or shall i carry this heartache eternally?
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  1. Old Comment
    I think that this poem expresses a wonderful relationship from your past that has recently been rekindled. Your lover, however, pushes you in some way or another beyond what you are comfortable with. Recently, you have doubts about the sincerity of your lover's love for you, but you hope that his intentions are good and true. (I could be wrong of course.)

    Thanks for sharing this; perhaps I'll write some "romance" related poetry too. 'Keep it up, Milady.
    Posted 09-19-2010 at 04:52 AM by TheFeatheredÆtheling TheFeatheredÆtheling is offline
 

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