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Cynical Ballads - Special Poem - A Flower

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Posted 02-03-2010 at 10:20 AM by Good Super Villain

A Flower

not long ago
i met a beautiful flower
growing
in a field of weeds

she was so unhappy
and could not see the sun
so angry at herself
and taking it out
on everyone

she yelled at me
and i listened
she yelled some more
and i listened more
she asked my why
why would i
even care

i said
i understand
i said
you are such a beautiful flower
she said
i want to die
i said
but a flower needs to bloom
she said
that made me cry

then she told me why

i said
your life has been tragic
this is true
and i told her
there is so much more to you

you are a flower growing in the weeds
make sure you bloom and reach for the sun
start today
before your time is done

then over time
i saw this flower grow
she reached the sun
and what a brilliant show

never has there been a flower
so brilliant and bright
every part of her
sparkling in the light

i am so lucky to have had
this chance
to see my flower
laugh
sing
and dance

she tried so hard
to stop me from caring
she knew after all
her time was ending

but still i listened
and listened some more
and i reminded this flower
about her beautiful soul

today i lost
my beautiful flower
i have to admit
its already tough with out her

but she gave me a gift
a chance to see
the love in her heart

she loved
everybody
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  1. Old Comment
    Good Super Villain's Avatar
    Written on one of the most painful days i have ever had to endure.
    I was a writer once, but I quit and only began again at the wish of a sweet one.
    Then she was taken from me and everybody.
    Today i post this not for you but for her
    .
    .
    My muse may indeed be dead
    but she lives in my heart
    and still fills my head
    and inspires my art
    until my death beds
    final part
    Posted 02-03-2010 at 10:25 AM by Good Super Villain Good Super Villain is offline
  2. Old Comment
    A reply to the poem...A Flower

    I am flower...
    growing amongst the weeds.
    Of lunacy and grief,
    of gangsters and thieves.

    I live and frolic,
    among anxiety and pain.
    Of lost and hopelessness
    with death i am stained.


    Yet you chose to care...
    to uproot me from my place!
    To change my fate in life,
    to debate and plead your case.

    at first you failed to heed
    the reason why i chose
    to suffer with the weeds
    to lay with them so close

    Your love gave me strength.
    to continue with my goals,
    no matter how difficult
    and gently... i will close.


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    Posted 02-04-2010 at 06:34 PM by hamiltonmark3 hamiltonmark3 is offline
  3. Old Comment
    Good Super Villain's Avatar
    A Flower. October.
    The flower has passed,
    Yet the weeds still grow.
    The nights get colder
    Still no sign of snow.

    I hope at least
    One seed has fallen
    And sleeps through winter.
    Until it hears
    Spring calling.

    How can I wait
    Through the darkest nights?
    Wait for a chance
    To again see your life.

    Everything looks dead
    In the field you grew.
    Just tell me when its time
    For me to join you.
    Posted 02-05-2010 at 07:52 AM by Good Super Villain Good Super Villain is offline
 

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