Metamorphosis
I am torn. Two halves dividing. I feel it deep inside of me. There is no escaping it. There is no denying it. My body aches. The pain is too familiar. I clutched my hands around the metal student desk in Sophomore Biology class at Alaska University. Sweat dropped from my forehead in the air conditioned room. Chills rushed up my spine and I shivered in a brief moment only noticed by me. My long nails scratched the surface of the classroom desk and protruded into the hard aluminum....

Harper Collins Authonomy Reviews:

This is really well written and draws the reader in right from the first sentence! Very entertaining style of writing which I love! BACKED

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Jim Darcy wrote 39 days ago

Cleverly plotted and well thought-out sci-fi thriller. Charactersiation and dialogue all work well and the setting is very belivable. I realise that you are writing from first person POV but I could have done with...