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Conversation Between HumanePain and OnyxBat
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  1. HumanePain
    08-02-2010 03:44 PM
    HumanePain
    Yeah, I did publish it May 2007, in an anthology of poems and stories.
    ^_^
  2. OnyxBat
    08-01-2010 09:07 AM
    OnyxBat
    Your poem is really, really good. Have you ever thought about publishing it?
    I choose the user name because i have a big obsession with onyx jewlery and bats.
  3. HumanePain
    08-01-2010 12:01 AM
    HumanePain
    I like your username OnyxBat. I used onyx in a poem once, it is too long to post in its entirety here, but here is a small section of where I used it:

    His Only Fear

    ...

    I am proud to stand

    beside you,

    for you too

    take a stand,

    for what is right.

    Your brave stand makes you

    larger than life,

    though fate has made you

    delicate and fragile.

    When I see your Eyes accuse

    the wrong and the cruel

    I know the depths

    of your sweet contempt.

    I see the soft and yielding

    form

    that nature has granted you

    in this life.

    It belies your great fury

    and your great love.

    Your power hidden

    behind dark sheets of onyx

    that drift across

    your fair skin

    and shoulders.

    How many times

    I was not brave.

    I should have tasted

    your sweet skin

    when you called me

    in my waking dreams.

    But for my only Fear:

    Would you despise

    the Desire in my heart?

    ...

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