Ryeasy_Darkato

Hello! Sorry if I'm bothering. I understand this sounds like an odd request, but here's the thing. I'm new at this, but I recently wrote a gothic rock song and I would really appreciate a feedback. I think this is the right place for it. I know there is also rate my poetry site, but this is a bit different. Would you mind reading it and tell me what you think, please? It's OK if you're not interested, of course. Thank you in advance.