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Jonathan 11-08-2009 12:58 AM

Awkward
 
Twisted paper in the shape of words
While I dance around a conversation
and force a hand I'd rather hold
Eyes dart like rodents into corners
while shaking fingers stir the ice
I need another fucking drink

HumanePain 11-08-2009 09:22 AM

You captured the ill-at-ease in social settings well.

Apathy's_Child 11-08-2009 09:27 AM

Yeah, I agree. I like this.

Jonathan 11-08-2009 11:46 AM

What can I say, the memory is fresh. Thank you for the kind words though it is much appreciated.

Learning how to make paper napkin roses is an art worth studying. I'm seeing the muse for this piece in a few days.

Jonathan 12-07-2009 10:24 PM

That is an interesting insight on my piece.


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