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Forum: Literature 11-26-2008, 05:19 AM
Replies: 90
Views: 17,408
Posted By Damned Queen
Ha I'm usually getting bored of reading them

Ha I'm usually getting bored of reading them
Forum: Literature 11-23-2008, 05:07 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,511
Posted By Damned Queen
Who says I don't? I totally agree with him!

Who says I don't? I totally agree with him!
Forum: Literature 11-22-2008, 04:38 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 3,105
Posted By Damned Queen
Chop Suey - System Of A Down

Chop Suey - System Of A Down
Forum: Literature 11-22-2008, 03:39 AM
Replies: 90
Views: 17,408
Posted By Damned Queen
I like it that your poems are short and with a...

I like it that your poems are short and with a very nice tone!!
That's something I'd never be able to do!!
Forum: Literature 11-22-2008, 03:33 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,511
Posted By Damned Queen
hehe I know it doesn't stand out... and the...

hehe I know it doesn't stand out... and the tittle is pathetic (so it'd be awesome if anyone has a better one) and yes it's full of emotion... even though it's not good I like it... it gives out a...
Forum: Literature 11-22-2008, 03:21 AM
Replies: 18
Views: 3,105
Posted By Damned Queen
"Little angel Your world can be so cruel I...

"Little angel
Your world can be so cruel
I set your wings on fire every night
I die for you every time I see you cry"

That's what it bombed in my head at the very beggining of your poem (lol)
Forum: Literature 11-20-2008, 06:22 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,511
Posted By Damned Queen
Requiem For My Dreams

Crying again
I am wailing for my praises
Weeping to death
I try to fill up empty pages
My lamentation's dirge
Is the music to compose
The requiem for my dreams
Upon the lyrics my grieve wrote
Forum: Literature 08-04-2008, 04:04 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,817
Posted By Damned Queen
Thank you so much for taking the time to post all...

Thank you so much for taking the time to post all this!! Now ay least I now where to start from!!
Forum: Literature 08-03-2008, 09:11 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,817
Posted By Damned Queen
Thamks you very much for explaining it to me!...

Thamks you very much for explaining it to me! Your very kind!
Do you have anything written in AABB, ABAB or in ABCABC to check out?
To get an example, you know!!
Forum: Literature 08-03-2008, 08:29 AM
Replies: 39
Views: 4,401
Posted By Damned Queen
lol you're right! Despite that there is a great...

lol you're right! Despite that there is a great meaning behind those words!
Forum: Literature 08-03-2008, 08:20 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,817
Posted By Damned Queen
Relax JCC! It's just a heavy metal song! It...

Relax JCC! It's just a heavy metal song! It sounds great with music with all that solos etc! And yes it's full of opposition! That's why I wrote it that way!

Minyaliel you're not being a bitch...
Forum: Literature 08-02-2008, 02:31 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,817
Posted By Damned Queen
Dark Mind, Pure Soul

This is the first song I've ever wrote! I've improved a lot since then but still I have no idea what to do to make it better! Any thoughts? Opinions are appreaciated!!

(Verse 1)
No silence in the...
Forum: Literature 07-31-2008, 01:51 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 2,126
Posted By Damned Queen
That must have been terrible! I'm really sorry! I...

That must have been terrible! I'm really sorry! I can understand how you feel even though me and my mom are best friends!
Forum: Literature 07-31-2008, 09:55 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 2,126
Posted By Damned Queen
I like it too! To be honest if you didn't...

I like it too! To be honest if you didn't meantion it's written about your mom I'd never known lol! But it doesn't matter!
You don't seem to get along well with your mom, right?
Forum: Literature 07-31-2008, 09:45 AM
Replies: 22
Views: 2,492
Posted By Damned Queen
I agree with Minyaliel that if you have no idea...

I agree with Minyaliel that if you have no idea what you're writing about neither will your readers have! In my opinion the thing is to have a picture in your mind so that your readers will be able...
Forum: Literature 07-31-2008, 09:27 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,283
Posted By Damned Queen
I meant write! Not right! (in the 1st sentence)

I meant write! Not right! (in the 1st sentence)
Forum: Literature 07-31-2008, 09:26 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,283
Posted By Damned Queen
Smile You should not compare it at all! You should only...

You should not compare it at all! You should only right what you feel even if it isn't good enough for all the "experts" out there! Some will support you, some others will laugh at you but that's...
Forum: Literature 07-31-2008, 09:21 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,824
Posted By Damned Queen
He's right! The point in the lyrics is totally...

He's right! The point in the lyrics is totally diffirent! You shouldn't be depressed though! You should live your life the best way you can! By wailing you achieve nothing but more "pain"!
Forum: Literature 07-31-2008, 01:17 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,824
Posted By Damned Queen
Do you suffer from Cystic Fibrosis?

Do you suffer from Cystic Fibrosis?
Forum: Literature 07-30-2008, 01:23 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,305
Posted By Damned Queen
It reminds me of an incident here.... some people...

It reminds me of an incident here.... some people say that they've seen devil in a motorbike outside the monastery... lol.. so narrow-minded! Well it reminded me of that picture....!
Forum: Literature 07-30-2008, 02:48 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,283
Posted By Damned Queen
Oh, I'm so sorry for your friend! At least your...

Oh, I'm so sorry for your friend! At least your pain was productive! Your poem is really great!
Forum: Literature 07-30-2008, 02:42 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,824
Posted By Damned Queen
Anti-hero?? Well I never thought of that!! ...

Anti-hero?? Well I never thought of that!!
Actually Andrew this "poem" (well it's actually metal lyrics and it goes along great with music) is about those who despite their innoscence have suffered...
Forum: Literature 07-28-2008, 01:02 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,824
Posted By Damned Queen
Unfairly Cursed

We were thrown in abyss, chaos
We were forced to live in this world
Never did something to deserve this Divine judgement
And suffer for you
We only tried to prevent hope from dying

We're...
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