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Forum: Literature 05-18-2010, 12:52 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 3,068
This is cool. The puntuation is fucked, but we're...

This is cool. The puntuation is fucked, but we're all big kids here. I understand this story and I like it. You could fix the punctuation if you wanted. Infact, you should. Use the proper one in...
Forum: Literature 05-05-2010, 06:09 PM
Replies: 3,273
Views: 769,904
Rigt now I'm reading that really popular short...

Rigt now I'm reading that really popular short story that's online. The one Kristen Stewart was talking about...it's pretty good..
uhh..here is the link...I don't know the name...
Forum: Literature 05-04-2010, 04:03 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 2,756
The plot thickens

“I think someone’s following me”

It was all too much for Sharon. Her father had been murdered, her mother wrongly accused, the real killer was out there, and now this.

“The killer?” Emily asked...
Forum: Literature 04-30-2010, 02:18 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 3,320
I like this poem. It was nothing like what I...

I like this poem. It was nothing like what I expected it to be. That's a good thing, because I hate the title. Sorry. It just makes me thing of some guy on a mountainbike, power pedaling around the...
Forum: Literature 04-29-2010, 06:08 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 3,105
For real??? C'mon. If you really have these...

For real??? C'mon. If you really have these morbid feelings, and you want to express them through prose, don't saym the same things that we've all heard before. This language: Cold, stillness,...
Forum: Literature 04-24-2010, 06:12 AM
Replies: 125
Views: 40,306
...the uh...huh. I uh...

...the uh...huh.
I uh...
Forum: Literature 04-23-2010, 01:03 PM
Replies: 125
Views: 40,306
I'm writing a little 'one act' about a mentally...

I'm writing a little 'one act' about a mentally retarded hairdresser who has just discovered the cure for cancer.
Forum: Literature 04-23-2010, 09:51 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 3,523
I do want to make this story better. When I...

I do want to make this story better. When I rewrite it I'll keep everything that you're saying in mind. Some of my allusions are probably a little vague, but I have to defend the substance of the...
Forum: Literature 04-22-2010, 12:07 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 2,054
the tollbooth. (short horror)

The tollbooth


Bill Soughton was a stout man of sixty years, whose expanding width seemed to be compensating for his diminishing stature. On this night, just as every weeknight for the passed...
Forum: Literature 04-22-2010, 12:06 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 3,523
I guess I wanted to show the ugly side of the...

I guess I wanted to show the ugly side of the mundane. It wasn't so much of a story as...I wanted the reader to spend a few minutes with this character. You could think about it if you wanted. You...
Forum: Literature 04-21-2010, 07:08 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 4,047
I thought it was great, but plot aside; the...

I thought it was great, but plot aside; the dialogue was hillarious.
Forum: Literature 04-20-2010, 10:33 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 3,523
Luther in the dark

1.

This was the fifth time that Luther Alvarez had gotten drunk, and cheated on his wife. The first two times had been with stripers who were willing to break the no touching rule for a hit of...
Forum: Literature 12-26-2009, 11:51 AM
Replies: 33
Views: 5,633
Why don't you post some of your magnificent...

Why don't you post some of your magnificent poetry so that we have a basis of comparison.

Frankly; if this post buzzed through my head during intercourse, I would not be able to maintain an...
Forum: Literature 12-10-2009, 07:19 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 3,112
Because this story is written in the paranoid...

Because this story is written in the paranoid suspicions of the narrator, any attempt I made to build other characters would just re-enforce the narrators character. His judgements and understanding...
Forum: Literature 11-29-2009, 02:28 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 3,112
I did stick to the plot. Little detours add...

I did stick to the plot. Little detours add character... atleast that is what I like in the shortstory's that I read...

Any way, thanks for reading this.

Most people find it difficult to read...
Forum: General 11-14-2009, 02:04 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,151
Private Message

How do I send Private Messages?

How the hell do I talk to my friends? Why don't I ask my friends...
I dont have any.. I just want to know.

The FAQ section of gothic.net says my CP has all the...
Forum: General 11-14-2009, 11:11 AM
Replies: 652
Views: 71,624
..seeing how big han solo's lightsaber gets when...

..seeing how big han solo's lightsaber gets when master yoda..
Forum: Literature 11-13-2009, 03:37 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 3,557
Wrong thread Elvira but, it sound like you've got...

Wrong thread Elvira but, it sound like you've got some neat tatoos.
Forum: General 11-13-2009, 02:50 PM
Replies: 2,401
Views: 265,303
Domesticated birds scare the shit out of me...

Domesticated birds scare the shit out of me because, they can get to places I cannot.

On a more personal not; it is hard for me to make friends because, I tell accurate things about people after a...
Forum: Literature 11-12-2009, 11:32 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 3,112
of course, can't be certain that I never come...

of course, can't be certain that I never come back because, you never finished reading this. :)
Does it really seem all over the place? I thought I would have been blowing my load if I laid out the...
Forum: Literature 11-11-2009, 04:51 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 3,112
I dont know how to answer your question. Did you...

I dont know how to answer your question. Did you like anything about the story? I mean... I know that I'm no Stephanie Meyers but; Every one has to start somewhere.
Forum: Literature 11-11-2009, 03:33 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 3,112
brain dogs (short story)

There are seven dogs on my street. One day they started barking and they haven’t stopped since. I can hear them wherever I go. It does not matter if they appear to be barking or not. Inside of my...
Forum: Literature 11-11-2009, 08:31 AM
Replies: 78
Views: 16,495
I like when a film is different from the book. It...

I like when a film is different from the book. It allows the audience to get something new. All of Kubrick's adaptation were brilliant, and it should be noted that his Shining was way better than the...
Forum: General 11-10-2009, 06:03 PM
Replies: 77
Views: 9,197
Tell that to David Cross. con: I don't know...

Tell that to David Cross.

con: I don't know Karate
pro: I know KARAZY
Forum: General 11-10-2009, 05:47 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 4,074
let's all take a moment to think about how funny...

let's all take a moment to think about how funny that is....wether it happened, or someone justthought it happened...it's just such a funny thing to hear someone say.

whew...I did'nt even read the...
Forum: Literature 11-10-2009, 05:24 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 3,557
Great, that's what I need. Why did it suck? ...

Great, that's what I need. Why did it suck?

btw : Thanks for reading and giving a semi-complement
Forum: General 11-10-2009, 04:22 PM
Replies: 83
Views: 12,069
Like any of the 12 year old girls who see the...

Like any of the 12 year old girls who see the twilight movies know who the fuck Peter Murphey is. They Probably think the Bauhaus are the assholes who did 'who let the dogs out'.
Forum: Literature 11-10-2009, 04:10 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 3,557
That's cool, Tex. Thanks for taking the time to...

That's cool, Tex. Thanks for taking the time to read it.
Forum: Literature 11-10-2009, 03:48 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 3,557
Well, that's a big commitment. While my ability...

Well, that's a big commitment. While my ability as a storyteller might be little more than 'awkward' perhaps, I am an expert brow beater and you're biting off more than you can chew. Did you ever...
Forum: Literature 11-10-2009, 02:49 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 3,557
Is that ecclesiates? Your statement is true...

Is that ecclesiates? Your statement is true however, all writers (atleast the ones from the horror genre) try thier hand at the 'buried alive' story. This one had a twist though. The girl needed...
Forum: Literature 11-10-2009, 12:00 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 3,557
'That tasted bad...I could'nt even take a single...

'That tasted bad...I could'nt even take a single bite.' That is a equivalent of what you have just said.
I have posted stories in similar forums, and they're always peppered with similar replies. I...
Forum: Introductions 11-10-2009, 09:05 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,347
I really like Oscar Wilde and Stephen King. But,...

I really like Oscar Wilde and Stephen King. But, I'm also a huge fan of Orwell and Milton. I want to read more Chuck Phalaniuk, I finished 'Survivor' and I like his prose.
At the moment I'm...
Forum: Introductions 11-09-2009, 11:30 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,347
spanked... Ok.. One month ago I quit my...

spanked...

Ok..
One month ago I quit my job as a salesman and moved to Lithuania. That my wife and I have a little place here is just one reason why. I'm 25 (just turned on the 2nd of this...
Forum: Literature 11-09-2009, 11:17 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 3,557
untitled flash fiction

How much breathable air is in a coffin?
Jill wants to know. Unfortunately there is no WiFi in a coffin 5 and a half feet under freshly dug cold soil. Why only 5 and a half feet? Tom had no tools of...
Forum: Introductions 11-09-2009, 11:12 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,347
newbie intro # who knows

I just wanted to take a second to say "Hi", because I believe that's how things are done.

again, Hi.

r.i.p.
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