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There are some moments that are promising here, but you must understand that this piece comes across as pretty generic. I mean, honestly, the people that will be clicking to read this the most are probably gonna be the not-so-minority of babybats that end up swarming here.
(and they'll leave blind criticisms like "this was really good" because since it's a darker poem they feel they relate to that because we all now how dark they are. Not good for feedback).
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