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Not sure if I should pursue this or not
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07-13-2010, 04:30 PM
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allyssa
Join Date: Jul 2009
Location: victoria british columbia
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I think it starts out really beautifully and gripping but when you get to the miriam part, I think it is how you flesh out her character, she is too juvenile
she needs more quirks, she seems really phony.
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