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Old 09-02-2009, 02:23 PM   #1
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Quick little poem

rip it apart at your leisure, it reflected my mood

I have dreamt it
Here, in my shattered mind
Assaulted by thoughts subdued by time
Verily the specter said,
"Entombed in here, this wretched womb.."

Darkness now,
Relentless black,
Eating through the mind's shackles
And spilling out upon the blank slate of personality
Mend it please, restore me now
Take me out of this shattered hell

Its gone, its done
Time's taken me now
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Old 09-02-2009, 02:30 PM   #2
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Nice enough, but seriously? Verily?

Wait, I think I want to name my daughter Verily.

ThanX for the inspiration!
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Old 09-02-2009, 02:32 PM   #3
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lol, i was bored and trying to make the first line, be spelled out by the first letter of the sentences going down, and i couldn't think of anything else for V.

I pity your daughter in that case.
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Old 09-02-2009, 02:34 PM   #4
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Hey, it's better than Moxie CrimeFighter Jillette.

Oops, wrong again, NOTHING'S better than Moxie CrimeFighter Jillette!!!
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Old 09-02-2009, 02:36 PM   #5
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If nothing else you would have to do that just to see the reaction.
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Old 09-02-2009, 02:37 PM   #6
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Too late. That is Penn Jillette's (of Penn & Teller fame) daughter's name.
You're welcome for the help in upping your post count.
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Old 09-02-2009, 02:39 PM   #7
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Yes, because thats definitely my goal in life..

Thanks though
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Old 09-02-2009, 02:47 PM   #8
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Don't mention it. Ever. Seriously.
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