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10-28-2005, 06:39 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2004
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Don't worry, Mael, I read "deviantart" as "colonoscopy", so don't feel too bad.
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10-29-2005, 02:25 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Pennsylvania
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Many brave generals have surrendered on the battlefield. Maybe those generals are the bravest of all. That is why I would like to announce that I will no longer be posting on this thread.
I wanted to go with dignity, that is why I will be leaving now. Engaging in an endless fight only proves how stupid you are, and so I'll be the first to be smart.
MusicAddict, I urge you to keep writing no matter what this big baby says about you. If nothing else, keep writing just to piss him off. I know you'll be brilliant.
Juliet, I'm glad to see you have sense. You'll be a great asset to the site. Mr Maelstrom, I completely agree about the deviantart.
TStone, with all due respect, go wither your dick.
I'll be writing around the Literature forum. See you there.
Fare thee well
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10-29-2005, 06:02 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: The Netherworld between yo momma's legs.
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Wow Tstone, I haven't seen you for a while, We've all missed you 
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10-29-2005, 11:55 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Dallas, TX.....Like you even give a damn.
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Hey Disfunction, I would be happy to browse your work with your permission, and if you would be so kind as to give me some opinions on my art...
http://korova.deviantart.com/
Please be mindful I'm still in the process of uploading and a lot of the stuff is old, from back in my high school days.
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TwistedKitsune: I like broccoli too! Just not when it's thrown out a window at my back by an ornery 5 year old...
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11-01-2005, 10:58 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: Canada
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By all means, do, and I will attempt as best as I can to help you in the same way. Sorry I didn't happen upon this thread for some time. Seems I've been busier than I had previously thought.
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11-01-2005, 11:01 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Dallas, TX.....Like you even give a damn.
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Thank you kindly for the response. I do not have time tonight to look at your stuff, but will be glad to do it tomorrow or sometime later this week. Thanks again Dis.
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11-02-2005, 12:13 AM
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i thought it was an intresting start. i mean taking that a a opening to a novel that would b a gud way to start off. A person we know nothing about, walking into a bar to get given a job? i thought its an intresting concept.
but there are many mistakes as which have been mentioned extensivly. i would take out the van bit, and add a load more description to the 2 girls the street and bar.
but thats jus me....
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11-02-2005, 12:19 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2005
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How old are you SDGY?
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11-03-2005, 07:44 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Australia
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How could I not have known there was such great entertainment from reading a thread like this one?
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11-12-2005, 06:34 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Within the dark recesses of my soul
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Disfunction RE:~ Your site
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I've had a look around your site as you requested and I have some questions and comments for you. Would you care for a dialogue in private?
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