You Will Never Get Rich

Tea and Cake or Death · 08-17-2008, 12:30 AM

You Will Never Get Rich ,
Off the love of a strawberry blonde.
Dreaming in doubles and dolls.
Movement, love, and romance.
Dancing circles in black and white.
Studying the art of devotion,
as fever fills your veins.
isn't it exciting?
Entrancing taboo beast.
Forbidden nightmares sail.
Unlocking the dark affair.
Upon a sinful tryst.
Desolate, abandoned, barren,
Do we dare dance again?

Underwater Ophelia · 08-17-2008, 05:59 AM

I really like that.

It's exciting to read, and it's mysterious, but not unclear.

Tea and Cake or Death · 08-17-2008, 09:52 PM

Thank you. It's a poem about Rita Hayworth.

Underwater Ophelia · 08-18-2008, 07:53 AM

She's lovely.

Disaffected Shoelaces · 08-18-2008, 08:36 AM

I really liked this - there are some excellent lines in there. Although I think it starts better than it ends.

Tea and Cake or Death · 08-20-2008, 01:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Disaffected Shoelaces

I really liked this - there are some excellent lines in there. Although I think it starts better than it ends.

The first line is the name of a Movie Title, and the second line also contains a movie title.

Ishan · 08-20-2008, 09:27 AM

"Dreaming in Doubles and Dolls" ... there are a couple ways to interpret that ... and I think I've gone both directions ... *ponderous screwing up of the face*