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12-09-2009, 01:36 PM
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Join Date: May 2008
Location: Your mother.
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My Gothic Poem
The moon lies half in Darkness,
It cast an eerie light upon the oceans of Darkness,
Within the oceans lie the creatures of Darkness,
Their eyes burn with the eternal Light of Darkness.
I lay on the borders of Death,
Half in and half out of Death,
Lol I got bored so I can't be arsed to finish it. What do you think guys?
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12-10-2009, 12:08 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2008
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Don't know, I also got bored and couldn't be arsed to finish it.
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12-10-2009, 12:33 PM
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Join Date: Jun 2009
Location: A ship called Dignity
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You didn't use the word darkness nearly enough.
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12-10-2009, 01:19 PM
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Join Date: May 2008
Location: Your mother.
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Quote:
Originally Posted by All Shall Be Judged
Don't know, I also got bored and couldn't be arsed to finish it.
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O.M.G I totally agree with you. Gothic poems are lame. Emo poems are extreme!
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The Overture To The Symphony Of Destruction.
I am the Antiproduct!
There is, they say, no fool like an old fool - Golding.
" All the war-propaganda, all the screaming and lies and hatred, comes invariably from people who are not fighting." - Orwell.
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12-23-2009, 06:16 AM
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Join Date: Dec 2009
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What on earth do you mean by "emo poems are extreme" ?
Isn't emo a transcendence from gothism? Just look at where the fashion came from.
Ohwell.
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12-23-2009, 09:09 AM
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Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: Sheffield UK.
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Man, you just tattooed "moron" on your forehead.
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12-23-2009, 10:49 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2007
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Parody 'goth poems' are as played out as, and unequivocally less funny than, sincere 'goth poems'.
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12-23-2009, 11:53 AM
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Join Date: Nov 2008
Location: Earth.
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You totally didn't include how your soul is empty enough.
Ha-ha!
; )
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12-23-2009, 06:34 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2009
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I think everyone is entitled to have their "moron" moments.
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01-18-2010, 01:36 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2010
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Quote:
Originally Posted by DRM
You totally didn't include how your soul is empty enough.
Ha-ha!
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I wasn't gonna laugh, but then I did.
oh well.
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01-18-2010, 03:30 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2010
Location: Medford, Oregon, USA
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Being able to laugh at yourself is the first step towards achieving real self-esteem.
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01-18-2010, 08:19 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: Brisbane, Queensland, Australia
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01-18-2010, 09:19 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2010
Location: Infront mi cogida laptop
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stupid poems, just came out from the darkness
why dont you just come home and drink some baileys!
that half something probably means your dumb brain pit!
it's good that you didn't finish it or your fucking dead meat.
got it? next time try composing some songs!
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