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Old 03-20-2008, 10:53 AM   #1
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Kill All The Cool Kids

Kill kill kill...
The cool kids

Kill kill kill
The cool kids
Until they are dead

How I wish to be in your ranks
I wish I could be just like you
I want to be you

So I don the black
And some discarded black
Potato sack

And I expect you to like me
I expect you to accept me
Even though I blatantly
Piss on your aesthetic

Because I'm a rebel.

Kill kill kill
The cool kids

Kill kill kill
The cool kids
Until they are dead
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Old 03-20-2008, 11:12 AM   #2
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thats true. (cool. kill the cool kids!)
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Old 03-20-2008, 11:13 AM   #3
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BAHAHAHAHAHA!!

That...... was awesome.
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Old 03-20-2008, 12:07 PM   #4
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I think it's my best work yet.
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Old 03-20-2008, 01:27 PM   #5
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Heh. If this is referring to what I'm thinking of, it's awesome. :-)
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Old 03-20-2008, 01:56 PM   #6
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So I don the black
And some discarded black
Potato sack
lmao I loved these lines
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Old 03-20-2008, 02:14 PM   #7
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Hahahah. Aw, I like you.



You forgot to start every word in CAPS though.
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Old 03-20-2008, 03:06 PM   #8
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Hahahah. Aw, I like you.



You forgot to start every word in CAPS though.
No, I am an artist! *snaps fingers*
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Old 04-06-2008, 06:55 PM   #9
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That was very nice. =P

"And some discarded black
Potato sack"

Made me fall out of my chair >.>
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Old 08-09-2009, 05:15 PM   #10
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That actually reminded me of a Group I was forced to join called
"Cool kids die happy."
I sure would like to send this to them on a postcard.
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Old 08-15-2009, 05:50 AM   #11
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I'll get the pitch forks!!!!

cool poem.
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