The Working Man's God
A poem of mine I thought you guys would be interested in.
Here I am decaying in motionless fear,
Trapped under It's eternally falling hand,
The vile wonder,
Like a token of some Decadent God,
Displayed prominantly on the hideous wall,
They pray to it incesscantly,
Giving it their constant plea,
Worshiping It's every decree,
Those wandering,
Pondering,
Time-squandering,
Fools.
All around me,
Their motions lazy,
Their motives hazy,
Welling over,
Crushing pain,
Certain death,
Callous watchers,
Out of breath.
It's also on my deviant account.
I was sitting at college waiting for two hours to talk to my consular when and the song "The Dog's a Vapour" came on my ipod and I thought of this poem.
Tell me what you think about it, and of course who you think the Working Man's God is.
Also, no need to hold back on criticisms if you honestly don't like it. I want to know what people actually think.
Thanks in advance.
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