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Literature Please come visit. People get upset, write poetry about it, and post it here. Sometimes we also talk about books.

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Old 11-08-2009, 12:58 AM   #1
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Twisted paper in the shape of words
While I dance around a conversation
and force a hand I'd rather hold
Eyes dart like rodents into corners
while shaking fingers stir the ice
I need another fucking drink
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Old 11-08-2009, 09:22 AM   #2
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You captured the ill-at-ease in social settings well.
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Old 11-08-2009, 09:27 AM   #3
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Yeah, I agree. I like this.
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Old 11-08-2009, 11:46 AM   #4
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What can I say, the memory is fresh. Thank you for the kind words though it is much appreciated.

Learning how to make paper napkin roses is an art worth studying. I'm seeing the muse for this piece in a few days.
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Old 12-07-2009, 10:24 PM   #5
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That is an interesting insight on my piece.
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