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Old 12-17-2009, 01:07 AM   #1
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Alas! I muttered, death is not death
There is no death
Death is but transendence
But to where, I cannot say... Who can say?
In a world where we aquire knowledge but "know" nothing
Grasp at straws but hold nothing
And to the one who deny
I would ask only:
"Can you grasp the concept of nonexsistence?"
So as your lips shape goodbye
And you shed a tear
Remember this is only awakening
I am finally alive

What do you think?
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Old 12-17-2009, 01:21 AM   #2
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Few typos sorry nonexistence, transcendence acquire****
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Old 12-17-2009, 04:16 AM   #3
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I thought you said you didn't write "shitty goth poetry?"
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Old 12-17-2009, 04:21 AM   #4
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I think you should take a lot of xanax and go sit on the train-tracks.
Shit, that rhymed!! I'm a poet, me!!
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Old 12-17-2009, 11:26 AM   #5
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I thought you said you didn't write "shitty goth poetry?"
Wow do you guys understand anything, the poem is not about being depressed or hating life. It's philosophical, on regards to a supposed afterlife. You should shoot yourself now and stop being so ignorant. Your stupidity precedes you.
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Old 12-17-2009, 11:47 AM   #6
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Alas! I muttered, Siris is not Siris,
There is no Siris,
Siris is but an asshole
But to what end Siris remains on Gnet, I cannot say. ...Who can say?
In a world where we acquire knowledge but "know" nothing
Try to write poetry but achieve nothing
And to the one who deny
I would ask only:
"Can you grasp how to correctly spell nonexistence?"
So as Siris' clichés start mating with each other to create the Optimus Prime of blaisé
And you roll your eyes knowingly at his painful literary output
Remember this is only Siris
And Siris is a stupid asshole.
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Old 12-17-2009, 12:13 PM   #7
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And that, is the most intelligent person on this board.
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Old 12-17-2009, 12:41 PM   #8
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And that, is the most intelligent person on this board.
That's not saying a lot.
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Old 12-17-2009, 12:55 PM   #9
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Alas! I muttered, Siris is not Siris,
There is no Siris,
Siris is but an asshole
But to what end Siris remains on Gnet, I cannot say. ...Who can say?
In a world where we acquire knowledge but "know" nothing
Try to write poetry but achieve nothing
And to the one who deny
I would ask only:
"Can you grasp how to correctly spell nonexistence?"
So as Siris' clichés start mating with each other to create the Optimus Prime of blaisé
And you roll your eyes knowingly at his painful literary output
Remember this is only Siris
And Siris is a stupid asshole.
And for all your supposed "intelligence" you have not wisdom. You are at the mental capacity of the rest of these baboons. The king of termites is still just a termite. And at the end of the day you accomplish nothing but show me more of how stupid and inane people are.
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Old 12-17-2009, 01:24 PM   #10
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And for all your supposed "intelligence" you have not wisdom.
I have not wisdom.
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Old 12-17-2009, 01:27 PM   #11
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If I poke Sirus with a needle, will the escpaing hot air cause him to shoot around the room like a balloon with the end let loose?
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Old 12-17-2009, 02:41 PM   #12
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And for all your supposed "intelligence" you have not wisdom. You are at the mental capacity of the rest of these baboons. The king of termites is still just a termite. And at the end of the day you accomplish nothing but show me more of how stupid and inane people are.
That was beautiful...

Especially considering how much more awesome in general 'dat JCC is than you.
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Old 12-17-2009, 04:39 PM   #13
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That was beautiful...

Especially considering how much more awesome in general 'dat JCC is than you.
I'm not trying to be more awesome then anyone on this site.
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Old 12-18-2009, 02:31 AM   #14
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I'm pretty sure it's queen termite.
And no, by the fact they're a queen termite and not just a plain termite does raise them a little bit.

Big difference.
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Old 12-18-2009, 02:49 AM   #15
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I'm pretty sure it's queen termite.
And no, by the fact they're a queen termite and not just a plain termite does raise them a little bit.

Big difference.
There is also a King. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Termites
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Old 12-20-2009, 08:47 PM   #16
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The king termite is basically just a cum machine for the queen. He has no influence or authority. You chose the wrong monarch.
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