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01-18-2009, 11:27 AM	#1
OceanSoul Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Shangri-La Posts: 18	Hack my heart (Cyber Lyrics) Hack my heart Unlock my secret codes Come and listen this dark trance And dance with me in my environment Have u a crack for my hidden feelings? To bring me back to life Do you know the keygen? Or the password for enter in Phreak my heart Take me away to a virtual place Far away from My own cyberhell Now I'm flying into the console Now I'm free like an open source software Now I'm enjoying into binaries numbers Make our love> illegal

01-18-2009, 03:20 PM	#2
gothicusmaximus Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 2,687	This is pretty good for cyber lyrics. By which I mean it's so gut-wrenchingly awful as to make me wish I didn't know how to read.

01-18-2009, 03:23 PM	#3
mindless1 Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Everywhere Posts: 650	I LIKE it. __________________ What?

01-18-2009, 04:22 PM	#4
OceanSoul Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Shangri-La Posts: 18	Thanks!!!!!!

01-18-2009, 04:39 PM	#5
mindless1 Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Everywhere Posts: 650	really, I meant it. __________________ What?

01-18-2009, 05:38 PM	#6
exacerbatedpoet Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 118	It was a valiant effort but it could use some work. I think I got what you were trying to say, but you could work on communicating your point better.

01-18-2009, 06:14 PM	#7
OceanSoul Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Shangri-La Posts: 18	Kewl. I'm open to all kind of comments

01-18-2009, 08:39 PM	#8
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01-18-2009, 10:07 PM

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Sir Canvas Corpsey

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Originally Posted by OceanSoul

Kewl. I'm open to all kind of comments

Use proper spelling then we'll talk content and overcoming pathetic use of the language available.

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01-19-2009, 09:16 AM	#10
badteccy Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: In Your Pants, PA. Posts: 1,918	SO l33t! OMGJKJK!

01-19-2009, 09:19 AM	#11
Methadrine Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 3,332	Rubbish. Where's the beauty of the baud but lost on the newer generations... __________________ Wasted forever, on speed, bikes and booze. "Meow. Mew. Mrow. Maow? Miaox." - Lovely Delkaetre speaks cat.

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01-19-2009, 10:36 AM

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OceanSoul

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SO l33t!

OMGJKJK!

yeah! l33t

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01-19-2009, 11:33 AM	#13
badteccy Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: In Your Pants, PA. Posts: 1,918	I was fucking around, your poem is terrible to me. Hence the obvious "OMG...ya know what...fuck it.

01-19-2009, 12:13 PM	#14
All Shall Be Judged Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 265	Gimmicky, unimaginative,and altogether dreadful.

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