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10-04-2008, 12:15 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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yes i bow down to you my great lord of words bless me and forgive me for my sining ignorance
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10-04-2008, 12:23 PM
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#52
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Join Date: Jan 2007
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Originally Posted by Twisted-mind
yes i bow down to you my great lord of words bless me and forgive me for my sining ignorance
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I knew there was a reason I keep coming back here.
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10-05-2008, 10:06 AM
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#53
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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teach me oh great master
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10-12-2008, 11:04 AM
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#54
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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Love brings me back to the night i miss
Your eyes burn when they touch as cool as the moon's kiss
Can't believe you asked, you changed your mind
Wondering why I'm no longer blind
Love, it caught me again in its caressing snare
I just can't believe your there
Finally
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10-12-2008, 12:00 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2008
Location: Florida
Posts: 1,065
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Originally Posted by Twisted-mind
yes i bow down to you my great lord of words bless me and forgive me for my sining ignorance
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I see you know geometry. Sin cos tan makes me feel inferior also.
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Oh, but you can't expect to wield supreme executive power just because some watery tart threw a sword at you. If I went 'round sayin' I was Emperor, just because some moistened bint lobbed a scimitar at me, they'd put me away.
-Monty Python and the Holy Grail
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10-12-2008, 12:06 PM
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#56
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Join Date: Sep 2008
Location: Florida
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Anyways, my original reason for clicking...
(Haiku)
In the dead of night,
A snowflake falling in the wind,
My heart stops beating.
(Freestyle)
When I write down my feelings
It makes them seem concrete.
Why then don't I want to write
Reasons why I shouldn't love you?
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Oh, but you can't expect to wield supreme executive power just because some watery tart threw a sword at you. If I went 'round sayin' I was Emperor, just because some moistened bint lobbed a scimitar at me, they'd put me away.
-Monty Python and the Holy Grail
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10-12-2008, 12:43 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2005
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Nice haiku, but you have one too many syllables, I'm assuming you're keeping to the 17 syllable rule.
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10-12-2008, 03:23 PM
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Join Date: Sep 2008
Location: Florida
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Originally Posted by Saya
Nice haiku, but you have one too many syllables, I'm assuming you're keeping to the 17 syllable rule.
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Oops! When you said that I realized that the one I posted was my old poem. I wrote that one about 6 months ago and revised it a month or two ago. Here's the real poem.
In the dead of night,
A snowflake falls in the wind,
My heart stops beating.
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Oh, but you can't expect to wield supreme executive power just because some watery tart threw a sword at you. If I went 'round sayin' I was Emperor, just because some moistened bint lobbed a scimitar at me, they'd put me away.
-Monty Python and the Holy Grail
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10-18-2008, 11:09 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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wow yeah i don't go by any rule
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10-18-2008, 11:27 AM
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 4,678
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Originally Posted by Twisted-mind
wow yeah i don't go by any rule
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That's the fashion nowadays.
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10-25-2008, 08:08 AM
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#61
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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Well fuck fashion, i'd rather marry Bush then fallow in fashion
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10-25-2008, 11:52 AM
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Join Date: Jan 2007
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Originally Posted by Twisted-mind
Well fuck fashion, i'd rather marry Bush then fallow in fashion
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Moaning about Bush is also fashionable.
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10-25-2008, 12:08 PM
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Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: In the broken temple bells, in the ringing...
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Originally Posted by Ms.Moth
"There was an Old Person whose habits,
Induced him to feed upon rabbits;
When he'd eaten eighteen,
He turned perfectly green,
Upon which he relinquished those habits."
"There was a Young Lady whose chin,
Resembled the point of a pin;
So she had it made sharp,
And purchased a harp,
And played several tunes with her chin."
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A Lear fan I see. I have a book of his poems. The story of the four people who sailed round the world is possibly one of my favourites. Pussy and the Quangle Wangle...ahh how I laughed
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10-26-2008, 02:00 AM
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Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Raxacoricofallapatorius
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Originally Posted by Geoluhread
I leave this room, so it'll burn
Flames fight flames
Leading to a massacre
Life is a game, i play, you learn
Your lives, for me, only names
And i am the conqueror
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Here's another one, please, if you don't like it go easy on me
You said i was weak
You spoke right
Words fade out
No longer weak, not tonight
As the bloody rain pours down
The black rainbow shines
No sun, just the crying moon
Dark shades open my mind
This night may become your last
Abomination is my army
Things you've done in the past
Revenge is my only remedy
A gift from God, an angel i come
Many people were fooled, so were you
When i come i shall be undone
'cuz angels take lives too
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Geo, you would write pretty good metal songs.
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Because before too long there'll be nothing left alive, not a creature on the land or sea, a bird in the sky. They'll be shot, harpooned, eaten, and hunted too much, vivisected by the clever men who prove that there's no such things as a fair world with live and let live. The Royal family go hunting, what an example to give to the people they lead and that don't include me, I've seen enough pain and torture of those who can't speak...
- Tough Shit, Mickey by Conflict
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11-06-2008, 01:21 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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wow poetry turns to metal songs never thought i'd see the day.
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11-06-2008, 04:56 PM
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#66
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Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Raxacoricofallapatorius
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Originally Posted by Twisted-mind
wow poetry turns to metal songs never thought i'd see the day.
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Would you PLEASE stop talking?
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Because before too long there'll be nothing left alive, not a creature on the land or sea, a bird in the sky. They'll be shot, harpooned, eaten, and hunted too much, vivisected by the clever men who prove that there's no such things as a fair world with live and let live. The Royal family go hunting, what an example to give to the people they lead and that don't include me, I've seen enough pain and torture of those who can't speak...
- Tough Shit, Mickey by Conflict
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11-08-2008, 07:55 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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why exactly
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I turn away from the light,
it burns my eyes you see.
I have a need to fight,
life won't let me be.
Since you chose to stay,
I won't run.
I see light's chase delay,
Your life of darkness has only begun.
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11-22-2008, 03:39 AM
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Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Greece
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I like it that your poems are short and with a very nice tone!!
That's something I'd never be able to do!!
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11-25-2008, 12:54 PM
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#69
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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You could if you tried, wonder what you'd think of the poems that go up to five pages long.
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11-25-2008, 03:07 PM
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Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: Louisiana
Posts: 1,311
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[random poem]
When the death roots play,
damp autumn loess decries,
eternity springs.
[/random poem]
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11-26-2008, 05:19 AM
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#71
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Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Greece
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Originally Posted by Twisted-mind
You could if you tried, wonder what you'd think of the poems that go up to five pages long.
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Ha I'm usually getting bored of reading them
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11-26-2008, 12:53 PM
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#72
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
Posts: 104
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pity i enjoy writing them
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12-11-2008, 01:37 PM
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#73
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Join Date: Aug 2008
Location: in a boreing little section in a small town within Michigan
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Twisted in knots
My mind so weary
Blessed be these thoughts
Casting in your direction theory
Seeing my mind is knotted and weary
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02-09-2009, 12:30 AM
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#74
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Posts: 182
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Originally Posted by Twisted-mind
Blood in snow
Is the way to go
But black blood....
Steals the show
Think me weird if you wish,
But you haven't met my friend Paul...
THE TALKING FISH!
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YAY! I like it!
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02-09-2009, 12:30 AM
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#75
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Join Date: Oct 2008
Posts: 182
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Originally Posted by Twisted-mind
Love brings me back to the night i miss
Your eyes burn when they touch as cool as the moon's kiss
Can't believe you asked, you changed your mind
Wondering why I'm no longer blind
Love, it caught me again in its caressing snare
I just can't believe your there
Finally
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i like you're poems!
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