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Literature Please come visit. People get upset, write poetry about it, and post it here. Sometimes we also talk about books.

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Old 05-12-2007, 11:38 AM   #1
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Succeed

Betwixt the shadowed spectacles

Your incandescent, blue eyes

Grant me the luster

That has eluded, but the faintest senses

What displeasure! I needst pace

front-to-back within the conspicuous array

of blinded;

The black, daft, and deceived

I warranted the all-encompassing relief

A blood-sodden sigh

No tear shall bring me to such euphoric high

"Take relish", he departed in nonchalance

that resonated, but had yet to impede

The fragile, flailing, inner seeds,

Of lust and pitfalls unspoken,

Tend this tender spirit who laments in need

Who discards me with the sole will to succeed*

*in his name is implied.
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Old 05-12-2007, 11:56 AM   #2
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