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Literature Please come visit. People get upset, write poetry about it, and post it here. Sometimes we also talk about books.

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Old 07-08-2007, 04:53 PM   #1
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Question This is Deity(LifeWhore)

I'm away, will they knock?
Will they look while I am far away?
Clever animation of time

A ditch, a gully, a jump to the river
A vine to swing( a body from)
A ditch( to bury you)
A river for your erosion

Your atoms carried out to sea

Statuette, immortalized you've made me
Your blood runs forever
Appendage, limbless, yet I control
Remain staid on the block, fillet of the stalk(er)
Prey to terrorize(They are the horrified)
Hip deep bog, I become the glorifier, the
Servant of anything that entertains my eye,
Flesh, a pretty disguise of life
This is hidden until I find
Self afflicted
This is Deity

Nucleus entangled and trapped in my orbit
Your atoms carried out to sea

A fix, leapt hopefully, river baptized the sinner
And swept him away(Arm caught on a log and torn from the socket)
Sickness, stress; Relief (is craved, the plot thickens)
Quietus release swept it away( Face battered rocks tumble along the riverbed;
The spirit watching above the body mocks it)

I'm late, it will be locked
Did they wait with me away?
Careless abrasion of mine

A bridge, turned silent and a shortcut provides
A trip to lose yourself on(Lose the curse)
A destination(One to transfix your ways)
An exploitation of fantasy

All the atoms carried out to sea

I don't think they'd miss me
I don't think she kissed me
I do not act oblivious to actions against me

I don't need the jacket, my walls are padded
I don't bleed the static, it bleeds me rabid
I curse the ground I am to die on…..
Then I bless it, remembering why I bless the bed I sleep on tonight
Remembering that someday, I'll bed there to hear the Muffled Night
Moveless
Moveless, my body stiffens in fright, oh paranoia, how
Good to see you!(You fucking, fighting waste)
I am arisen in my Other
Internal, this is eternal
I am the goddamn Deity! This is Deity!
This
Is
Deity!!!

You are trapped of my orbit
You possess the body, now I'll teach you to whore it
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Old 07-09-2007, 03:09 PM   #2
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I really liked the poem.
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