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08-31-2009, 10:04 AM
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Thou Viking capital Denmark.
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Ants of the System
I couldn't decide if this went in literature or Music, so I will post my song lyrics here:
Ants of the System
Intro:
Brainwashed fools, puppets of the system.
Buzzling ants, mindless drones.
Why won’t you think, why can’t you act?
What keeps you from breaking the chains and freeing this world?
Chorus:
Gather around me, stand up and fight.
Fight these oppressions, fight the system!
Gather around me, stand up and fight.
Fight the mindless ants of the system!
Verse1:
Great, tall buildings, grand and impressive,
Blinding the drones, robbing their minds.
Don’t let them fool you, they are humans too,
They can crack, crumble and fall.
So join me, brothers and sisters, the war is on!
Chorus:
Verse2:
Corrupt politicians, brainwashed drones.
Pawns in the game, nothing more.
You want power? You want glory?
Get up, make a stand.
Stand up and fight!
Chorus:
Verse3:
Freedom costs your blood.
It’s the price of your mind.
Shatter your booth, break free and roam.
Let us break the chains, freedom to think.
Join the battle, the war is on!
Chorus:
Chorus:
Outro:
Join the battle..
Join us and fight.
Join the battle..
Free yourselves..
Don't be a slave...
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08-31-2009, 02:54 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Earth.
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Pretty much terrible.
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08-31-2009, 02:57 PM
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Join Date: May 2008
Location: Your mother.
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It sounds like some anarchist viking gibberish.
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The Overture To The Symphony Of Destruction.
I am the Antiproduct!
There is, they say, no fool like an old fool - Golding.
" All the war-propaganda, all the screaming and lies and hatred, comes invariably from people who are not fighting." - Orwell.
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08-31-2009, 05:58 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Harlem
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Make it about sex.
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08-31-2009, 07:37 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: In Antarctica with the Penguins
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Quote:
Originally Posted by KontanKarite
Make it about sex.
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and drugs and rock and rollz
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Droppin' knowledge since 1986.
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09-01-2009, 03:15 AM
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Thou Viking capital Denmark.
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It's heavy metal! :P
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09-01-2009, 09:46 AM
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Join Date: Apr 2009
Location: Dirty South
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Yeah, but that particular subject has been done to death.
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Kill your idol. Come on, jump into the void!
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09-01-2009, 09:59 AM
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Thou Viking capital Denmark.
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Unfortunately.
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09-03-2009, 04:36 PM
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Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: Harlem
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Go the other way about it. Write anti-liberating lyrics. Stuff about supporting your international corporations and killing children. Maybe even lyrics about firing loads and loads of your fellow countrymen to outsource your labors to other countries that would do it for far far cheaper wages.
Instead of trying to write angsy revolutionary lyrics, look at the world for its ugliness and laugh about it.
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09-03-2009, 05:04 PM
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Join Date: Mar 2009
Location: Fiddler's Green
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I second that notion, Kontan. Satire rarely fails.
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09-04-2009, 07:53 AM
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Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Thou Viking capital Denmark.
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KK - that's not a bad idea at all, I may just do that.
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