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09-15-2008, 02:31 PM
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Almost there.
So I just thought I'd go for it and post a candid poem about sex!
I'm almost there
I muffle my screams
The tingle of my hair
My wildest dreams
He goes in deeper
I begin to squee
He has just tinker
All over me
I clutch and grab
The blood rushes
I cannot keep a tab
My face flushes
I twitch my toes
And bend my neck
The pleaseure throws
I'm a pleasure wreck
It's coming, it's here
I collapse in tear(s).
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12-23-2008, 08:29 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2008
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Bump.
Here's another poem by me. I was having fun, I bet you can guess what its about ;]. But I actually put a lot of effort and time into crafting it.
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12-23-2008, 09:27 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2008
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You can see you definitely put in a lot of time an effort into this. It is very detailed and gives someone a rather interesting visual. The subject is a little unorthodox but nicely written poem in my opinion. ^_^
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12-23-2008, 09:38 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2007
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Originally Posted by Remidalia
You can see you definitely put in a lot of time an effort into this. It is very detailed and gives someone a rather interesting visual. The subject is a little unorthodox but nicely written poem in my opinion. ^_^
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The subject is a little unorthodox? Right, only the most shameless iconoclasts write poems about sex! This individual is clearly a moron, and I advise Unimatrix to discount her worthless opinion.
This isn't really so much a poem as an insipid, cliched, 'raunchy' hallmark card. The line about your boyfriend pissing on you made me laugh though, so my reading it wasn't a complete waste of time.
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12-23-2008, 09:58 PM
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Join Date: Dec 2008
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Originally Posted by gothicusmaximus
The subject is a little unorthodox? Right, only the most shameless iconoclasts write poems about sex! This individual is clearly a moron, and I advise Unimatrix to discount her worthless opinion.
This isn't really so much a poem as an insipid, cliched, 'raunchy' hallmark card. The line about your boyfriend pissing on you made me laugh though, so my reading it wasn't a complete waste of time.
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I suppose you are right, even though I'm not a moron. But think whatever you like, you are inclined to do so without any sort of consent from me. Have a good day/night.
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12-23-2008, 10:02 PM
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Join Date: Aug 2007
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So you just arbitrarily decided to deactivate your immense knowledge of poetry, along with your general common sense, before you made that post?
I see.
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12-23-2008, 10:11 PM
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I have no immense knowledge of poetry, I only read it and am only just turned 17. I do not claim to know anything 'immensely', for what reason would I? There is often things that need to be learned but is normally overshadowed by egotistical opinion. I have even learned something from you from seeing your point, rather than arguing that somehow mine is better that yours, even though mine is actually worse. I do use my common sense, though apparently it isn't obvious.
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12-23-2008, 10:27 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: El Paso, Texas/ Ciudad Juarez, Chihuahua
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That's how you have sex?
A lousy position and you crying?
Can you do nothing right?
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I cleave to no system. I am a true seeker."
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Originally Posted by George Carlin
People who say they don’t care what people think are usually desperate to have people think they don’t care what people think.
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12-24-2008, 12:01 AM
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Join Date: Feb 2007
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Jillian has giant man hands. Anyone else notice that?
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Not all beliefs and ideas are equal.
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12-24-2008, 04:19 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2007
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Originally Posted by Unimatrix 00
He goes in deeper
I begin to squee
He has just tinker
All over me.
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I just tinkered a little too, but not in the sexy way, in the piss-yourself-laughing way.
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All pleasure is relief from tension. - William S. Burroughs
Witches have no wit, said the magician who was weak.
Hula, hula, said the witches. - Norman Mailer
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12-24-2008, 11:02 AM
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Join Date: Dec 2008
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Lousy poem about lousy sex is lousy.
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12-26-2008, 04:27 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2008
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Hehe, I'm glad you all like the poem.
and OK Mr. Filth/Eclipsing the Son/whoever else you are, that is YOUR opinion and YOUR opinion only.
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12-26-2008, 04:30 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2005
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That you think "it's only his opinion" is only your opinion.
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I cleave to no system. I am a true seeker."
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Originally Posted by George Carlin
People who say they don’t care what people think are usually desperate to have people think they don’t care what people think.
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12-26-2008, 04:31 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2008
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Excuse me? Did I not tell you not to talk to me?
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12-26-2008, 04:32 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2005
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I also did not tell you to talk to me, so don't talk to me. Oh snap I win!
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"No theory, no ready-made system, no book that has ever been written will save the world.
I cleave to no system. I am a true seeker."
-Mikhail Bakunin
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Originally Posted by George Carlin
People who say they don’t care what people think are usually desperate to have people think they don’t care what people think.
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12-26-2008, 04:38 PM
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Whatever, ladie.
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12-26-2008, 04:46 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: El Paso, Texas/ Ciudad Juarez, Chihuahua
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It's "lady", mang.
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"No theory, no ready-made system, no book that has ever been written will save the world.
I cleave to no system. I am a true seeker."
-Mikhail Bakunin
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Originally Posted by George Carlin
People who say they don’t care what people think are usually desperate to have people think they don’t care what people think.
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12-26-2008, 04:47 PM
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I hate you sooo much. Y'know, with an attitude like yours, you'll be beaten up so fucking bad. And you'll come on here and tell us, and I will actually laugh so hard.
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12-26-2008, 04:50 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: El Paso, Texas/ Ciudad Juarez, Chihuahua
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You're jealous because your boyfriend would go gay for me.
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"No theory, no ready-made system, no book that has ever been written will save the world.
I cleave to no system. I am a true seeker."
-Mikhail Bakunin
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Originally Posted by George Carlin
People who say they don’t care what people think are usually desperate to have people think they don’t care what people think.
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12-26-2008, 04:51 PM
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Oh fuck off. You'd never piss on him as good as I can.
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12-26-2008, 04:52 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: El Paso, Texas/ Ciudad Juarez, Chihuahua
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.... that's your idea of a victory?
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"No theory, no ready-made system, no book that has ever been written will save the world.
I cleave to no system. I am a true seeker."
-Mikhail Bakunin
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Originally Posted by George Carlin
People who say they don’t care what people think are usually desperate to have people think they don’t care what people think.
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12-26-2008, 04:57 PM
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He also thinks I'm funny, sexy, energetic and so pretty. So much he refuses to piss on my face. I only let him piss on my hands and breasts lol xxxx
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12-26-2008, 05:15 PM
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Join Date: Jun 2008
Location: Chicago, Illinois
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As a bisexual who prefers females, I can honestly say I'd do Jillian over Uni...
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12-26-2008, 05:17 PM
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Thats your opinion, isn't it darling? I'm not everyones cup of tea, and no crowd pleaser. I divide minds, get people talking. I am me. I am the controversial bitch.
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12-26-2008, 05:18 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: El Paso, Texas/ Ciudad Juarez, Chihuahua
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Originally Posted by Unimatrix 00
I am the controversial bitch.
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That's your opinion.
__________________
"No theory, no ready-made system, no book that has ever been written will save the world.
I cleave to no system. I am a true seeker."
-Mikhail Bakunin
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Originally Posted by George Carlin
People who say they don’t care what people think are usually desperate to have people think they don’t care what people think.
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