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Old 01-29-2010, 05:05 PM   #1
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I have been critizising poetry several times now...

So yeah, I suppose it's long overdue that I embarrass myself with some of my own very horrible poetry
At least now it's an even battlefield.

I wrote this for a friend of mine who means the world to me.

Yumi:
You are my light, a star on the dark nightsky.
A rose in a garden of weed, the beauty amongst the beasts.
When I think of you, my face betrays me with a smile as wide as the vast oceans of this world, and my eyes glow and my heart races.
When I hold you, I forget your thorns and your flaws, and when I see beyond your closed petals, I see the true beauty of this world.
And when I am without you, my soul cries crimson tears.
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Old 01-30-2010, 04:56 AM   #2
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Does this friend of yours happen to be crying_crimson_tears?
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Old 01-30-2010, 07:22 AM   #3
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Does this friend of yours happen to be crying_crimson_tears?
Or a cheeseburger?
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Old 01-30-2010, 04:32 PM   #4
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Mmmm, cheeseburgers.
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Old 01-30-2010, 06:22 PM   #5
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No aaand... no
FYI, I don't care much for cheeseburgers alone, I'd rather eat something spicy
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Old 02-10-2010, 06:08 AM   #6
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Absolutely beautiful. Stunning. Fluid. Imaginative. Erotic. Sensual. Just perfect. I can feel my manhood throbbing wildly.
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