An invitation for abuse (a personal foray into poetry)

[Razeal18]

such paleness glow and talented hand.
such pain and sadness of such quick sand
such soft caress of pillows down
They'll wait for me to come around

such tasks to be done for ones like us
such is punishment for sysiphus
such struggle for sanity in such a time
its not my manners that i mind

such threats spoken from lips so sweet
such evil times for eyes to meet
such pain and depth for a righteous cut
alas for our fate is as such

such cold blood and colder tears
such confirmation of one own fears
such a different view from this blade's side
there are no rules to wich abide

such ease in cutting as if to mate
be still my love for Such is our fate

do your worst critiqes of da net and you can has a cheezbuger

[Krick Wurkheiser]

I like it. It has a charming mysterious atmosphere, so well done. It's better than anything I ever wrote, probably...