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Literature Please come visit. People get upset, write poetry about it, and post it here. Sometimes we also talk about books.

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Old 09-01-2008, 02:19 PM   #1
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Walking on Wind

In a land of timeless dreamers
Where toes never touch the ground
A community of creators
Spin ion threads of sound

A weaving of electron waves
Emotions both light and grave
Rhythms beating in time with others
Songs that warm the soul of lovers
A daydream singing in tongues
That only solid hearts can hear

These waves in a magical medium
Like patterns in a pond
Turning and returning
Pass through and then move on
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Old 09-01-2008, 02:43 PM   #2
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Cute, but the last two lines of the middle stanza thew out the rhythm.
But interesting little ditty.
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